bodanna ([personal profile] bodanna) wrote in [personal profile] lanlin 2013-06-04 10:25 pm (UTC)

I like your use of adjectives to describe how you felt about the essay. Her essay was so formal and point-blank that it felt stunning and astonishing to the facts that were being thrown in your face. I also agree with your point on gender inequality, it's unfair that women suffer so much from war. I found myself wondering what the effects on men are, if they were compared, which would be worse.

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